you have to tell me what it is. (I'm not a mind reader.)
please make it terse -- a paragraph
or two, not a chapter, or anything like a chapter.
(I have to read the passage side by side with your outline,
to check that the latter correctly represents the argument in the former.)
My experience is that attempts to outline longer stretches of text
don't generally work out well.
Aug. 27 (for those of you who have already taken a class
from me, who know what these outline
assignments -- not the same as microcommentary assignments!
-- are supposed to look like, and who want to get an early
start): Either
Pink, Free Will: A Very Short
Introduction, para. bridging pp. 38f ("But this is
not quite..."),
or
pp. 46-48, from "Take a case where..." through "...which
option in particular I follow".
Sept. 3: Either
Hume, first Enquiry, sec. 8, Part I, 5th para. ("It seems
evident that..."),
or
sec. 8, Part II, 4th para. ("The only proper object of
hatred or vengance...").
Sept. 10: Either
Ismael, "Rethinking Time and Determinism," pp. 150f, from
"Nor is the transcendent perspective..." to "...and nobody else,"
or
Ismael, "Free Will in the Physical World,"
from "When it comes to voluntary behavior in a
human being..." up to the end of the page (that is, up
to the next section,
"The self: what are you?").
Sept. 17: Either
Chisholm, "Human Freedom and the Self" (ch. 1 in Watson),
p. 35, para. starting "This means that, in one very strict sense...",
or
>Robert Kane, "Responsibility, Luck, and Chance" (ch. 15 in Watson),
p. 308, from "The first step in response..." to the end of
the section.